4.18.2007

"The Material Things": View/Critique

Note: Before viewing, read synopsis.

Self-Critique
Given that this was done in a week, I didn't get to do all that i needed. I need to go back and ad in small constants such as the shirt and neck-tie which disappear toward the second half.

Class Critique
- Add more background layers; scenery
- "Rick" stays on the Beetle too long
- Animate the inanimate positions.
- Establish relationship between "Rick" and wife
- Motorcycle moves too slowly
- Play up the motorcycle
- Beef up the transition from Drama to Action

5 comments:

Ben Colar said...

Yo that is really good. Probably the best I've seen from and MCA student. Good Job!

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